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Old 03-24-2008, 07:41 AM
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cound anybody correct this plz?

Without changing too much of your content, this would be a basic edit to make things a bit more correct. Good luck!

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Many soccer fans exist, and I am one of them. As a soccer fan, I wrote this magazine article with the purpose of learning about soccer in different countries (where their first sport is soccer). I chose six countries from different parts of the world, and I selected them because they play an important role in soccer.

Soccer is the world?s favorite sport and that?s a reason why many things exist that refer to soccer. There are soccer stores where we can find shirts, balls, and equipment to play soccer. In addition, we can find soccer video games, or we can also find many particular soccer schools, books, and magazines. For example, the magazine that I created is about soccer in different countries around the world. I began with the United States, because I believe that there will be a great future for soccer in the U.S. The United States is one of the most powerful countries in the world, and for this reason they are making good changes to increase soccer's popularity in the United States. The second country I chose is my native country, Ecuador. I chose it because it means something to me, and because I wanted to learn more about it.

The next country that I found interesting is England. England is considered the home of soccer. It is said that the English made soccer one of the most popular sports, and that they were the first to play the game. The next country that I chose is Spain. I selected it because I really like its professional league. The league from Spain is very interesting and popular. I have learned about their club teams and their national team history. My favorite team comes from Spain, and it?s called Barcelona. I have also found Argentina's soccer interesting. It?s amazing the amount of Argentinean players that are members in some of the most popular clubs in the world. Further, Cameroon is considered the best team from Africa. For this reason, I wanted to learn about its history and the current status in Cameroon.

In conclusion, these six nations are interesting because they play an important role in soccer. Soccer continues to be a popular sport- and it?s fascinating to learn about the impact it has around the world.
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